Next chapter, 5/5. I like how it’s somewhat noticeable the author’s experience gained throughout the novel. Some of the earlier characters felt a little flat but the newer characters are more fleshed out IMO. For example Masamune and Ras, it feels as if there are real problems these characters have to carry aside from the “ITS A GAME WORLD” narrative.

Although, it would be nice to see more of the original cast. These recent chapters, it feels like they’ve been relegated to the sidelines. It’d be nice if they could also benefit from the Author’s improvements.
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